Wednesday, December 17, 2014

Parent Comment for Portfolio

1. I liked the college essay piece the best, for obvious reasons I'm in it! But in all seriousness, I liked  how Lennon thought I was going to make him watch a boring "old" movie with me and was able to look past his preconceived ideas on how Rudy was going to be and actually enjoy it and understand the message of Rudy and was able to express this in his essay.

2. I like how well spoken and thought out the writings are. The only improvements I would say is a misspelled word here and there.

3. I would say ideas, because the subject matter was more personal.

4. I thought they were all great.

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