My grandma is a very loving and caring person. Whenever we
need something, she is one we can count on. Something that always expresses her
hospitality and love is her famous fried rice. Whenever I eat her fried rice, I
can feel the dedication and love that went into making it.
Our family doesn't really have much tradition to uphold. But
as far as I can remember, my grandma has always made this fried rice. It was
one of the many reasons why I always loved for her to come over my house. Just
thinking about it now makes my mouth water and my stomach growl. I can start to
picture her cooking it. The aromas of eggs and different breakfast meats filled
the air. The hot, moist steam brushing on my face.
As she cut the first package of Portuguese sausage open, I
could see her enter a deep focus. She moved as swift as a professional chef,
cutting the oily sausage into bits and bits. then, she moved on to the spam.
She plopped open the can of spam and jerked out a thick soggy piece of meat. As
gross as that sounds, my grandma's cooking would always suppress the facts.
Like the sausage, she cut the hunk of meat into bits and bits until it was like
a jigsaw puzzle. Putting each type of meat into a separate bowl, she then broke
six eggs. She jabbed each egg against the side of a bowl, and cracked it in
half until a gooey, thick liquid came out. Then she stirred up the yolk.
She had everything ready, except the main part, the rice! She
pulled the steaming, sticky rice out of the rice pot, and set heated metal bowl
on the counter. Ready to start putting everything together, she first dumped
the rice into a second pot. Then she added oyster sauce while she stirred. The
aroma of bland rice soon changed into a more appetizing smell, as she added
pepper and garlic seasoning.
Each time she did something, she explained to me what she did
and how she did.
“You don’t have to cook the eggs all the way, because they
will cook more in the fried rice….. Always add two teaspoons of garlic to the
spam beforehand, so that the spam will have more flavor… Portuguese sausage doesn’t
need oil because its already packed with it.” She would say.
Every time she said something, I listened intently to her
instructing voice, knowing that she wanted me to learn the recipe and keep the
tradition going. Anxious to know about the recipe, I started asking her
questions as soon as I thought of them… “Where did you learn how to make this?
Why don’t you cook the rice all the way? How do you always make it the same?”
Trying to make out a story, I could see how with a slight smirk every time I asked
a question. I could tell she thought each question was “goofy”… but that was
just my grandma.
She told me that when she was in her early twenties, her dad
taught her his way of making the fried rice. Then over the years, she modified
it, making it unique to our family, learning things from her friends and family.
Now that my great grandpa is gone, she says that every time she cooks this
dish, it reminds her of his love and hospitality.
Listening to her story distracted me from what she was doing.
She slowly stirred in the Portuguese sausage, then the spam, and lastly, the
eggs. Each time she put an ingredient into the rice, the aroma grew and mad my
empty stomach growl more and more. As she finished, she put a shiny glass cover
over the pit, and yelled “It’s ready!” to my family lounging in the living
room. My excited family immediately rushed and grabbed a plastic bowl from the
counter. They walked up to the pit and shoveled scoops and scoops of rice in
the bowl. As it was my turn, I knew that there would probably be no seconds, so
I took the rigid plastic rice paddle and put as much rice as I could and then
sat at my wooden dining room table. A plastic bowl lying right in front of me. In it, a steaming
mountain of sticky mushy grain. Its color was a light brown, as if it was died
with soy sauce. in the big mountain, lay boulders of meat and eggs, lodged all
around it. As I dug my spoon into the top of the mountain, I pulled out a bite
size heap of rice, and shoveled it into my mouth. It tasted wonderful! A
fusion of different meats and flavors collided in my mouth. I couldn't get
enough of it.
As I ate more and more, I began to feel my empty stomach
slowly fill. And then, I stopped to the point where I could not eat anymore. As
my dad looked at my half empty bowl, he excitedly asked me, “Are you finished?”
for I knew he wanted it. I gave a disappointed “Yes” and handed him my bowl.
Although my family isn’t very traditional, this recipe has
always ran in the family. And now that I know a deeper meaning about it than
just being Grandma’s fried rice. For me, seeing my grandma cook this reminds me
about my heritage. The rice, white and bland, would be me. And as different
foods and seasonings were added, which would be the different cultures and
customs, the end result would be a delicious unique dish, or a unique and
talented Lennon. This being one of the only customs I have, I will always try
to uphold this unique recipe.
EXCELLENT START! PLEASE READ OVER ESSAY BECAUSE THERE ARE SOME WORDS MISUSED (INTENTLY). ALSO TRY TO AVOID BREAKING UP ESSAY INTO TO MANY PARAGRAPHS TRY TO PUT TOGETHER THE ONES THAT SHARE THE SAME IDEAS. ALSO, YOU NEED TO ADD IN WHY YOU LOVE IT SO MUCH WHY ITS SPECIAL TO YOU, WHAT IT REMINDS YOU OF ETC. MS(3+)
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ReplyDeleteThis was an amazing essay. Your sentences flowed nicely and you had good vocabulary. The only thing I would change is to not separate the paragraphs too much. Great job.
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